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"I would like to
​commend Rachel's
 professional and creative approach to essay preparation.  Writing was never my son’s favorite subject, but in addition to college coaching, Rachel was a de facto English tutor.  His writing abilities developed brilliantly under her guidance, and every essay he submitted was not only excellent…it was entirely his own work.  That, right there, is a priceless skill in today’s word-oriented society."
- Leslie, Parent​

College Admission Essays

The college application essay is your chance to reveal the person behind the GPA and test scores. You want to tell a compelling story that reveals something about your character.

When you work on your college application essays, take into consideration all of the following:
  • topic selection and synergy between multiple essays
  • content: engaging intros, powerful storytelling, dynamic conclusions 
  • tone: finding your voice and revealing your personality
  • compelling language: making your essay memorable with vivid wording and sentence structure 
  • wordiness: omitting the irrelevant 
  • grammar, punctuation, word choice: no mistakes!
  • flow: improving transitions, structure, and readability 

Here are some great resources:
  • To get rolling on possible topics for your college admissions essays, supplements and scholarship essays, use this Essay Brainstorming presentation and accompanying worksheet
  • College admissions officers read a lot of admissions essays, so you want to find positive ways to make yours memorable; check out these Essay Do's and Don'ts
  •  Seven Essay Tips courtesy of Cambridge Essay Service 
  • An Admissions Dean Offers Advice on Writing a College Essay by Martha C. Merrill of Connecticut College 
  • Many supplemental colleges essays ask "Why Our School?" Here's a YouTube video from the always energetic College Essay Guy that explains how to structure your school specific application essay 
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"I would like tocommend Rachel's professional and creative approach to essay preparation.  Writing was never my son’s favorite subject, but in addition to college coaching, Rachel was a de facto English tutor.  His writing abilities developed brilliantly under her guidance, and every essay he submitted was not only excellent…it was entirely his own work.  That, right there, is a priceless skill in today’s word-oriented society."
- Leslie, Parent
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  • About
    • College Admission Coaches
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      • Newsletters 2023
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    • AI & College Apps
    • Why hire a college counselor?
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    • What We Do
    • Packages & Pricing
    • App Camp
    • Last Minute Hourly Help
    • International Students
    • From College to Post-Grad
    • Independent Educational Consultants
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    • College Acceptances
    • Testimonials
  • Resources
    • Career & Major Exploration
    • Test Preparation
    • College Search
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    • College Visits & Admission Interviews
    • College Gallery
    • College Admission Essays
    • Academic Resumes & Student Websites
    • Application Supplements
    • Financial Aid
    • First Generation Students
    • Neurodiverse Learners
    • Gap Year & Study Away
    • For Parents
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